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Prefer precision
A plain, exact sentence is stronger than a decorative image that blurs the meaning.
Prestige Writing Consulting
A focused revision check for students who want imagery and style to serve meaning without sounding artificial.
The language lens
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A plain, exact sentence is stronger than a decorative image that blurs the meaning.
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Metaphor and imagery should help the reader understand the student's experience or change.
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The review suggests where to revise, but the student keeps ownership of the language.
Revision focus
Figurative language revision asks which images are doing real work, which phrases sound forced, and where a quieter, more exact choice would better serve the student.